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How to Create Relevant Backstory that Drives (Not Stalls) a Novel

1/9/2023

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Author: Sandy Vaile 
Originally published in Hearts Talk eZine's March edition 2023

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Creating compelling backstory is essential for developing rich well-rounded characters that capture the interest of readers.


However, the wrong backstory can turn into an information dump that slows a story’s pace to a yawn. Read on to find out how to create backstory that is relevant to the plot, so it won’t detract from what’s important: the story.

It’s not enough to know everything about a character’s past, like where they went to school and what kind of cake they had at their 10th birthday party. While documenting your character’s entire life might be fun (for some) and knowing it certainly enables you to have a comprehensive understanding of who they are and where they came from, a lot of it won’t be relevant to the book you’re writing.

Say what?

Authors get chastised for information dumping when readers don’t see the relevance of the information. You can’t just throw information at the wall to see what sticks.

Backstory must be:
  • Purposeful; and
  • Relevant to what’s currently happening in the story.

But how can you make it so? 
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Backstory Timing: When to release the past for best effect

16/4/2020

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Author: Sandy Vaile

​Most of us know what backstory is and that our stories need it, are aware of the various delivery methods and even spend countless hours developing intricate histories for beloved characters, but knowing these things isn’t the same as successfully revealing the appropriate information at the right time.

This article will help you determine the best place to insert backstory by:
  • Figuring out which backstory is important.
  • Avoiding the pitfall of releasing too much in one place or too soon.
  • Understand when to reveal backstory in a way that enhances the front story.


Backstory is like the skeletal system in that it’s not always obvious, but the whole structure would collapse if it didn’t exist. This is because it provides the all important believable motivation for our characters’ actions.  
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Backstory Essentials

30/5/2018

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Author: Sandy Vaile
Originally published in Romance Writers of Australia, Hearts Talk ezine, April 2016

Today I’m going to explain why I believe backstory is like a potent spice, and you should too.

What is backstory?
You’ll read many different definitions on the internet, but for my purposes I like to define it as: Anything that happened to the character before this story started, which provides context to the story.

The important aspect is context. It’s not enough to throw a heap of character history in as filling, no matter how fascinating it may be. It must be relevant to the story. It’s also the base line from which you can show the all important change in your character by the end of the story.
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